Self Torture

Self Torture

A Poem by Ardeck
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i wrote this and 12:20 AM so if its a little off thats why otherwise i might add to it later

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i torture myself with you
why?
because i care ?
why?
because we used to be?
why?
because i love you?
why?
because it wasn't your fault
why ?
because I'm obsessed?

i dream off you . . .

my stomach starts to hurt . . .

i wish us together . . .

but know it will end in failure again . . .

somethings wrong with me . . .

i must be I'm obsessed . . .

© 2011 Ardeck


Author's Note

Ardeck
i hope you like it its a newer one, (tell its old)

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Written perfectly ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime obsession is all we got. Some people can twist us up and leave us confuse. I like the feel and the emotion of this poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 21, 2011
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Ardeck
Ardeck

Minong, WI



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