I Can't Believe You

about an ex

How could you do this to me?

All the times we used to laugh and be careless?

Did you care at all how much you're hurting me?

Oh, it's my fault that you're leaving?

What in the world did I do?

Oh, be boring?

It was you that bore me, I just kept msyself entertained.

Me? Have an attitude?

I only gave you an attitude because you never treat me right.

Oh, no more excuses? Well heres some pointers.

Loving you was the worst thing that could have ever happened to me!

I couldn't believe that my heart let you in!

You are such a! ugh words can't describe how much hatered that flows in my vains because of you!

Author's Note

Personal expirences can lead to great writings don't ya think?

Reviews

[RDOriginal]

This certainly catches the hurt and pain of breaking up. The use of all the questions in this poem reflects the endess questioning that goes on so well in addition to the betrayal you feel. I found the ending not quite bitter enough though, there's so much passion in the rest of the piece I would have expected something a little more... vicious I guess!

[J.Black]

I hate ex's! Ugh ugh ugh! I bet it felt great to get this out eh? Haha! Greatly penned.