Your Eyes

Let me tell you a thing or two about your eyes.

That could've made me believe so many lies

If I hadn't already refused

To get mentally abused

 

Merely covers, that's what they are

dangerously sparkling from afar

From time to time I shut my mind

Let them seduce me, make me blind

That's when I feel I've lost the fight

to this intoxicating sight

And I can't help but melt inside

For all of this I have to hide

Luckily I fail to memorize them clearly

So their mystery rests dearly

Forever in my soul...

Reviews

[Ranger Nadaly]

Wording is nice, almost reminds me of a song in ways. Desire and care and love and pain are hard and wide topics to cover, and are done so in many different ways, I think you grappled a nice classic "I love you but you aren't good for me"

[Lost_And_Found]

Thanks:)
'Toxic' feelings are more or less the inspiration for this poem, you're right.:)

[Moonlight]

It is a really deep piece. I was moved by your writing! The words of this poem are ringing with emotions that are really unmeasurable.

[Lost_And_Found]

Thank you so much!! This really means a lot!

[Moonlight]

you're welcome :)