crumble

dedicated to the inspiration of fran

big dumb guy
stumbling bumbling crumbling
his way through life
guess what happened
he got stabbed
in the heart
with a poison knife
the bleeding finally stopped
but the taint aint
the colors so much brighter then
that big dumb guy
is gonna do it again

Author's Note

type at me

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

We live and learn and we weigh things up. Where love is concerned we take risks. We never learn through our mistakes. A relatable little poem Jeff.

Chris

[LostSage]

Fran Marie dared me to write a sad poem....so I did...it was so easy....all I had to do was tell the truth....since last year my life has been twisted around..... I stay with my sister now.....I make sure she is well rewarded... and I am so thankful....she said seeing it from the outside I was being controlled... big dumb guy huh?....have a great day✨💐

[Chris Shaw]

It's good your sis is keeping her eye on you Jeff. She sounds like an angel. We all have our sad side. Let's hope there is more happy. Have a great day. You did well with the challenge.

Chris

[LostSage]

you! if you didn't live so far away across the ocean....I would come and grab you.....and I would treat you just right.....you would become known as Princess Chris.....have a superb day✨💐🌸

[Chris Shaw]

........... :)) Have a great day yourself Jeff.

[Fran Marie]

he still drips love's blood
from tainted knife~as dumb guy
never learns from life

willing to suffer
yet again~spins of the wheel
still say he won't win..

Nice write Jeff

[LostSage]

thank you Fran Marie
your opinion is important
....from dumb guy Jeff 🙄

[Fran Marie]

you re not a dumb guy far from it..thats just the poem s character
you re welcome Mr.Jeff
read moreyou re not a dumb guy far from it..thats just the poem s character
you re welcome Mr.Jeff