young love

this poem is inspired by Fran Marie's poem Dark Rain (filled with desire). I don't copy anyone....I copy everyone

see that girl?
on the other side of the pool
i know her from school
she could make everything bright
change this wrong
make it right
her voice so sweet
each word a treat
she knows me well
if I dared ask
she might say yes
what happens next
is anyone's guess

Author's Note

type at me

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Well you won't find out unless
you ask her...dare to take the plunge

[LostSage]

well it's not as easy for us boys as you think....we get our feelings hurt real bad...then we go go write sad poems....have a great day ✨🌹

[Fran Marie]

Awhh poor baby; now let's see
you write the saddest broken hearted
love poem ..c' mon you can do it..

[LostSage]

yea ok your gonna get the saddest poem
you ever read, so easy
all in good time my little pretty
all in good time

[LostSage]

and guess what?! I'm gonna enter my poem in a contest and I'm gonna win!! that will make you sad!! the saddest poem you ever saw!!!!

[Fran Marie]

Oh Jeff. you re putting the cart before the horse....i thought you
said you " didn't need a grade from teacher"..haha seriously I'm glad
to hear you might enter contests
my friend and good luck to you

[LostSage]

I wrote a poem just cause you said so..."crumble"