clouds

the last poem I write in ccat style

color fade
sunny beach shade
walk away
the ground turns mud
shoes wet
I don't care
pizza for dinner
you did not beat me
I did not lose
I am the winner
the clouds
so funny in the sky
everyone laughs
when they float by
end of story
want some more
go buy it at the store

Author's Note

you people get to me

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Every line of this seems to resemble a feeling that doesn't have one- the closest thing I can compare it to is nostalgia, something that everyone experiences, and I really, really enjoyed that! It's like I can't explain what makes this feel so new and fresh, and just a good poem, but it just clicks as you read it!

[LostSage]

well...I talked back and forth with Chris Shaw about you....you are impossible to duplicate...Carlos says the same thing too....you have a writing style that I find fascinating....it is words that don't fit together..... and random thoughts....keep writing.... there is no one that can do it like you.....stars and flowers to you darling ✨💐✨💐✨

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you a billion times- in absolutely flattered! I’m so happy that people really enjoy it as you say. Thank you so, so much. (: