Angels

Being noticed

Angels of mystery
Swirling in the sky
How much do they know about me
About my history
Would they even care why
I seem so sullen
Or am I just a bug on the ground
While the angels go swirling around
I write sweet songs
Do they hear
I feel so tiny
I don't think they notice me at all
Unless they had an angel microscope
They could see me
And say
He is so cute and small

Reviews

[Caroline B A Maguire]

An angel microscope lol..brilliant ! I love this poem ..so completely guileless..thank you.caroline 😊

[Zoe Richardson]

Angels know. They see you, and do not worry. Even if you are the size of a bug to them, they are benevolent beings. They won't squash you, and might leave you crumbs!

[LostSage]

I hope they leave me peanut butter cookie crumbs. I like peanut butter cookie crumbs. they are my favorite : )

[Zoe Richardson]

I am sure they would. Peanut butter is not my favorite, but butter would be nice. Some nice shortbread cookie crumbs would satisfy me as I make my buggy way through the world.

[Caroline B A Maguire]

Lol..I enjoy this banter!😅

[Chris Shaw]

The angels will notice you. Have no fea, they pay more attention to the ones who feel they are insignificant. Carry on writing your sweet songs. This poem is cute.

Chris

[LostSage]

When I wrote this I had a little smile on my face. I consider it whimsical. It is cute. Thanks for noticing. Have a sweet day Chris.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Even better than the last! I love this and the concept. The way you write is so great and enjoyable. The kind of poetry I’d buy a book of! The feeling of longing to be noticed is a guttural one I write about (probably too) often. The way you wrote it is so appealing and just so... GOOD. I loved the whole thing. Please keep writing! Have a wonderful day and stay safe. (:

[John the Baptist]

Personally, I think the angels would notice you. That's just the kind of guys they are.

[LostSage]

Who knows what the Aboves think of us. Your guess is as good as mine. Thanks for your review John. It is important to me. Have a superb day!

[Fran Marie]

This write up is so cute.
yes; there are angels and
they do see us no matter
how small our contributions
are in this big old world..angels
remember ..i do believe..

nice work Jeff

[LostSage]

Thank you. I studied you a little bit. You know how to get around on this website. Your opinion means a little extra. And yes I do try to be a bit cute. Glad you noticed. Have an excellent wonderful day.

[Fran Marie]

I did not know that
glad if I helped somewhat
you re s o welcome

[LostSage]

Yep I learned from you I can put up YouTube videos on my profile. I have to go to sleep now. Good night.