Love me as it is!

Sung by a 'Macho in malice'

Accept me with my problems,
Don't try to mend my flaws.
If having me is no gain,
Well.. losing me is a loss.

Losing me is a loss,
You won't get it so soon.
Like you don't value stars,
Until absence of moon.

What if I am sissy!
I bet you can't transform me.
And before passing such comments,
You should better inform me.

And you should inform me,
If you're a diplomat.
Cause if I dislike you,
I'll say that loud and flat.

Now coming to good terms,
I'm anything but arrogant.
Not asking for gems,
I just want a friend.

I just want a friend,
Its not too much to ask.
But if you are named Penny,
Getting love becomes a task.

I am hungry for affection,
And craving for love.
I don't instigate quarells,
I am a peaceful dove.

I am a peaceful dove,
Waiting for a peck or kiss.
I want you to love me,
And love me as it is..

Author's Note

Poem about being the most miserable creature on earth (an Indian teenaged boy, ggirly and good for nothing). This poem was written a year ago and is to be read aloud in a particular tone (angrily in the beginning and softly towards the end)

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
powerful and emotional.......
i understand this is about your sexuality in some aspect and not completely........forgive me if i am reading too much into it.
we are who we are............why must we change.........we are everyone.......and everyone is society.......equally......
being different.......in any respect......is a position of power as i believe........cause only then many more new things could be explored and advancement made..........
and as you said........it it their loss indeed.............when at horizon you see the sky and the earth meet..........it is beautiful........but you always keep a lookout for rainbows don't you?..........
awesome poem....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Penny]

Heartliest thanks friend. And yes, it is somewhat related to me but honestly I wrote to create much less effect but whatever it is, praise is never bad.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes praise is never bad.........!!! always a pleasure.............:) :)

[Penny]

:).....;).....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the repetition of lines leading into the next stanzas, i like that ...we can be so peaceful, yet unloved as if everyone expects us to be something other than what we are.

to me, that is a crime...everyone needs to be loved for exactly who he or she is...

we should have to fight for love...it should come to us naturally.

[Penny]

And still we proudly say that love changed us when it should have ideally changed our perception. Morethan this review, it matters to me that others think the same. Thanks a lot sir.

[Sami Khalil]

"I am a peaceful dove,
Waiting for a peck or kiss.
I want you to love me,
And love me as it is.."

Some value their faults and some value stars in the absence of the moon...Excellent...:)..................

[Penny]

Thanks sami. I really needed some appreciation.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................