Poem about being the most miserable creature on earth (an Indian teenaged boy, ggirly and good for nothing). This poem was written a year ago and is to be read aloud in a particular tone (angrily in the beginning and softly towards the end)
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WoW!!!
powerful and emotional.......
i understand this is about your sexuality in some aspect and not completely........forgive me if i am reading too much into it.
we are who we are............why must we change.........we are everyone.......and everyone is society.......equally......
being different.......in any respect......is a position of power as i believe........cause only then many more new things could be explored and advancement made..........
and as you said........it it their loss indeed.............when at horizon you see the sky and the earth meet..........it is beautiful........but you always keep a lookout for rainbows don't you?..........
awesome poem....
i loved it!!!
:)
Heartliest thanks friend. And yes, it is somewhat related to me but honestly I wrote to create much .. read moreHeartliest thanks friend. And yes, it is somewhat related to me but honestly I wrote to create much less effect but whatever it is, praise is never bad.
9 Years Ago
yes praise is never bad.........!!! always a pleasure.............:) :)
WoW!!!
powerful and emotional.......
i understand this is about your sexuality in some aspect and not completely........forgive me if i am reading too much into it.
we are who we are............why must we change.........we are everyone.......and everyone is society.......equally......
being different.......in any respect......is a position of power as i believe........cause only then many more new things could be explored and advancement made..........
and as you said........it it their loss indeed.............when at horizon you see the sky and the earth meet..........it is beautiful........but you always keep a lookout for rainbows don't you?..........
awesome poem....
i loved it!!!
:)
Heartliest thanks friend. And yes, it is somewhat related to me but honestly I wrote to create much .. read moreHeartliest thanks friend. And yes, it is somewhat related to me but honestly I wrote to create much less effect but whatever it is, praise is never bad.
9 Years Ago
yes praise is never bad.........!!! always a pleasure.............:) :)
So full of raw emotion, and beautiful hun. straight from your heart.
I love the meaning to it. I also like how you set it out, like kind of continued it on the next line, if you know what i mean.
Brilliant piece as always hun :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Heartiest thanks cimmy. Was waiting for your review :-P
9 Years Ago
lol I haven't been online for awhile. Though when im on I always look at your stuff :P
You are.. read morelol I haven't been online for awhile. Though when im on I always look at your stuff :P
You are welcome :)
9 Years Ago
You were off for a while. Well, I am back after ages. Hope, you utilised that time, glad you are bac.. read moreYou were off for a while. Well, I am back after ages. Hope, you utilised that time, glad you are back.
Not really, didn't have anything better to do really. Just been having writers block a little bit. <.. read moreNot really, didn't have anything better to do really. Just been having writers block a little bit.
Im glad you are back to :)
9 Years Ago
I was busy with assignments and then exams. All the best to you.
This a brilliant, heart-wrenching piece. I absolutely love how it sounds read aloud- so lyrical. The comparison to the absence of stars on a new moon night is stunning. Great poem!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I am glad you liked it. To put it frankly, I must tell you that I wished I would exactly such things.. read moreI am glad you liked it. To put it frankly, I must tell you that I wished I would exactly such things as you all have said about this poem. I am on cloud 9. Thank you.
Penny that was so beautifully written. Such a heart touching piece ,I liked it.
Losing me is a loss,
You won't get it so soon.
Like you don't value stars,
Until absence of moon.
My favourite lines that was.
Keep up the good work.
armin. ...
Penny, reading your poem breaks my heart, as I think I understand. Having myself, lived a life, which being different has been risky, being opening feminine, during the 1970s and 1980s, as a child. So who cares, if you're girly, the important thing is, you're being honest with yourself and the world around you. And yes, you do have real talent, no matter what others say to you. Am glad, to discover this poem, of your's.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I really feel honoured and delighted as a poet when I see how much my words have become other people.. read moreI really feel honoured and delighted as a poet when I see how much my words have become other people's voice. And that is highest achievement any poet can have and I am glad I recieved. Thank you.
I like how you carry over your last line to the next stanza, teenage years can be so difficult especially if we feel we don't fit in anywhere.. whatever it is that's supposed to be the 'norm', you'll find in time, you'll appreciate your uniqueness and not give a hoot what others think, we all deserve acceptance...especially within ourselves. Well done.
Its an honour for me that a poet like you, (expert) not only reviewed my poem but also kiked it. Tha.. read moreIts an honour for me that a poet like you, (expert) not only reviewed my poem but also kiked it. Thanks s lot ma'am.
10 Years Ago
Was my pleasure, you humble me Penny, I'm learning as I go too, I just love poetry. Good job here.
An introvert by profession, I've developed a love for writing to express my feelings. Sadly its my only talent, wanna know from you good people if I can be a writer professionaly.I dont fit into any g.. more..