Monsoon

Reflection of my present situation

Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains..

Author's Note

Another haiku

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

''I LIKE TO CRY IN RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS'' - I FOUND THIS HAIKU INTERESTING EVEN IF IT IS OF ONLY 3 LINES... SOMETIMES YOU DONT NEED TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS BRIEFLY, A SINGLE SENTENCE CAN DESCRIBE THE WHOLE SITUATION...
VERY GOOD HAIKU,,
LOVED IT...

[Penny]

Thanks a lot friend. Really a heartfelt review and praise. I'll cherish it for long.

P.S. you used the word 'briefly' incorrectly in your review

[Anindita Janhabee]

ITS BEEN A PLEASURE.... YEAH IT SHOULD BE 'IN BRIEF'... THANKS FOR THE RPLY..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
this is hands down brilliant......
i absolutely loved it!!!!
:)

[Penny]

Thanks a million times.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are very welcome dear poet.............!!! :) :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I don't like Haiku's very much honestly.
Though for how short this is, it has big depth and meaning.
pretty cleaver little write :)
You have a creative mind.
I liked this though.

[Penny]

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No worries hun :)

[Penny]

:-) ... :-)

[Tania]

sometimes all you need is a small sentence that expresses so much!
love it !

[Penny]

Exactly.. in just one sentence you have said all I wanted to hear. Thanks dear friend.

[Abbey Holt Voigt]

It takes a lot of work to write a haiku that has meaning and potrays power, you've done it very nicely. Love it :) keep writing!

[Penny]

Thaks a lot Abbey. This review means a lot to me.

[M.A.Rathore]

Nice free verse...
I like it..Keep it up..

[Penny]

Thanks sir.

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always....Please read some of my haiku from my book, "Rathore's Haiku Poetry"..

[Penny]

For sure sir.

[M.A.Rathore]

Good. Abd let me how you feel after reading it..

[Sami Khalil]

"Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains.."

[Rene Salinas]

Oh I got myself into this albeit unintentionally and because it was unintentionally I ended up reading a fair amount based on the kind and on point suggestions by Nusquam Esse. As I said I did not want to arive at a Haiku yet I also assumed incorrectly. It is not strictly meter bounded or syllable defined I think there is a allegorical language associated to engage into an experience that by definition should convey the essence of a experience in nature and/or the season and in a very delicate quasi intuitive way all that linked to human nature. And after I just type that all I can do is laugh and realized that irony is not a dead scene yet.

Hope this confuses you even more Penny

But in the meantime I do like your poem thankyou

[Penny]

Does that whole paragraph mean ANYTHING? btw.. thanks i am glad you liked it.

[Rene Salinas]

Sorry that's why I laughed in the end it was supposed to be help but then I realized that it was way too intellectual (poorly explained too) and when I read it it was obviously not going to help. I think you could read what a Haiku in English which is already a thing onto itself. Maybe then you would understand why you might get some comments. That was all sorry for the unintended humour.

[Penny]

Ok. But that was helpful and confusing..