Lamha pyar ka

A hindi verse I just wrote

Humein aapke labon se,
Labon ko awaaz se,
Awaaz ko alfaz se,
Aur alfaz ko jasbat se,
Tab pyar ho gaya
Jab aapne kaha ki
Aapko humse pyar hai...

Author's Note

Plz review.

Reviews

[Saddam]

एक उम्दा कवि की यही खाशियत होती है कि वह बड़ी से बडी बात को बड़े सादगी से बो�™ जाता है।
Ek umda kavi ki yahi khasiyat hai ki wah badi se badi baat ko bade sadgi se bol jata hai.
Impressive verse of heart mere bhai.

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya. Aapka sadgi bhara review humara dil chho gaya.

[Lucky garg]

Nice yrrrr....kam words me bahut badi bat....

[Penny]

Thnx buddy. :-)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Brilliant, I like it. Enjoyed the rich language and the depth of understanding.

बहुत खूब, मुझे यह पसंद है। अमीर भाषा और समझ की गहराई का आनंद �™िया।

[Rehan Roy]

ह्रदयस्पर्शी रचना , कवियित्री.

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka :-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Waah waah kya baat hai! Behtareen!
:)

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka..

[Avinash]

Accha hai .. taarif ke kabil.

[Penny]

Shukriya... :-)

[Sami Khalil]

I hope you provide an English version. Bravo.......

[Penny]

I thought so but if I do the charm of the third last line gets lost. Thanks for the review. I hope you understood it completely.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Utkarsh Singh]

Kya baat ... Kya baat.....

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka