Leave me alone...

Not a story, a paragraph, a thought.

When times are hard and you disturbed, even the chattering of your friends seems to hurt your ears and you feel like walking away from them to find peace in solace. Aggresion makes you thomp your feet hard to move ahead avoiding them when they are calling your name loud to stop you. Sooner or later when the situation repeats itself and you again walk away, you hear nothing but silence, no friend of yours wants you to stop. You turn back again and again wishing someone was there to hold you, hold your anger but to in vain. It is then you really get disturbed. Solitude brings silence but no peace, isolation becomes painful and loneliness seems endless.

Author's Note

After a long time I have written, somethindmg really personal, with no motive of carving like a verse or using it in a story.

Reviews

[BL]

It is a balancing act between the right amount of company and solitude too much of both can be not good for a person and that is what you have described so well in this short paragraph. I felt like I briefly got inside the head of your character, there is a nice rhythm to your writing, it has a good tempo. I liked this and hope to read more like it from you

[Penny]

Tenkew. U actually said it all and bly me! It ws nt a character but the real me. Still its good see that you cn relate.

[BL]

I never assume a writer is writing about themselves, you are very welcome

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. How did I miss this little gem of a writing. Glad I visited...:)......

[Penny]

Thanks a lot sami. Glad you liked it :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was written straight from your heart hun, i could feel it every word.
Its deep, emotional, and heartfelt.
Everyone goes through rough times and sometimes life isn't so easy.
If you want someone to talk to about anything, im a message away :)

[Penny]

Tenkew cimmy. You are really sweet and actually, at the time I wrote this I wasn't really very sad but it was the first outflow of emotions. And surely, who knows in a couple of days you get a message where I am swearing on someone you don't even know.. hehe. Anyway, thnx again for taking the time.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha your welcome hun :)

[Antonio Hernandez]

You have a knack for imagery and flow. And I don't just say this because I identify with your point of view. I don't know whether or not this is the first or final draft but as a whole it definitely captures your point as poetically and compactly yet fluidly as I can imagine. I'd just say in addition choose your diction and punctuation wisely.

[Penny]

Tenkew. I'll try to get better.

[Avinash]

It has a poetic value. But solitude gives birth to creativity as you wrote this piece.

[Penny]

Tenkew it means a lot to me.