V for valuable

Dedicated to sum1 whose name starts wid V, a crush of mine

I wish for you,
Do you wish too?
I seek permit into your heart,
Your eyes let me through.
I asked you for a walk,
But with me you flew.
Although our talks go on and on,
It takes a lot for me 2 say,
Thank you my "V"
And I love you!

Author's Note

I did write it as a poem, it was just an expression that rhymed!

Reviews

[David Trounce]

This is off track, but I love this, "An introvert by profession..." You're also a Poet, Penny. Thanks for a little romance. Did you mean for it to be Chiastic? The first four lines look like new love, the last four lines look like the love of those who have grown old together (old love). Everything on either side points like an arrow to the two middle lines - where the drama happens... "I asked you for a walk, But with me you flew."

[Penny]

Thanks a lot david for your review. And yeah I am very introvert but on my way of being a poet. And actually the terms 'new' and 'old love' are not that rigid in their meanting. Rather it is for a love that is growing. Still its all good till someone likes it. Thanks again.

[David Trounce]

Growing is a much better way to put it. When my wife and I first wed, we kissed a lot. Now we talk a lot.

[Penny]

Happy couple. Let your love grow. Thnx again.

[Sami Khalil]

"It takes a lot for me 2 say,
Thank you my "V"
And I love you!"

[Penny]

Tenkew....

[Sami Khalil]

:).......................

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww so sweet and romantic :)
How did things with this crush turn out Penny?
This was beautiful and straight from your heart, i like that.
Great write :)

[Penny]

Tenkew cimmy. And the end of this story is kinda wierd , I don' t know if it has ended yet. I'll message you everything :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

cool :) ill read your message when it comes :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwww this one is very sweet,the words from the heart.Good job!!!

[Penny]

Thnx a lot. And its kinda funny n cute dat i got dis review from sum1 whose name starts wid V :-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

I thought so but I did'nt want to be the one to point it out haha.You re most welcome.

[Penny]

Tenkew sam...you are helping me learn better

[Sami Khalil]

A good rhyming poem...Bravo..........................