Useless

My first attempt, at something I hv no idea about

You won't call me a singer,
If my voice you ever heard.
I won't be called a nerd,
Books arn't the ones i linger.

I am a terrific dancer,
And act like a dying bird.
And to the talented herd,
I was anything but near.

But when this annoyance flowed,
It became a pretty verse.
And stories rescued me,

From pains I always owned,
I got my only talent, I got a pretty curse.
Now I knew that a writer, I could be.

Author's Note

I kno it isn't gr8 juss point out d mistakes:-):-)

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Its very different, i cant decide if i like it, its not really about anything haha, it has no real meaning to it.
What i do like though, is that you wrote it anyway, it was what came to your head, probably what was in your heart so you jolted it down.
That's what writers do.
It rhymed well and came from your heart :)
I like the last line :)

[Penny]

Tenkew. :-) And yeah it was a not so thought-of. Infact, it was a silly attempt to write 'petrachan sonnet' a poetry type very rare used in English

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

oh yer :) your most welcome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

I think this poem was an honest and true description of the times of self explorations almost every writer goes through, before beginning his journey as a writer.

[Penny]

Thnx pushkar.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

U r welcome....

[Vidya Bacchus]

We all are just trying to find where we truly belong.A really great write:)

[Penny]

Thnx vidya. And indeed v search for our talents but dis search seems nvr ending wen u r disturbed.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well as we get older it gets easier sometimes.You are welcome:)

[Penny]

Ooh i wish i ever grow up:-P:-D
Thnx again btw

[Vidya Bacchus]

LOL....................

[Cletus]

i liked it ... this one came straight from your heart ... nice one :)

[Penny]

Thnx cletus

[Penny]

Thnx Sami.. for loving this wife..
& making me a luv it.

[Sami Khalil]

Writing is a venue for self expression and a path of life shared, longed or lost...Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem...:).............

[Penny]

Thnx Avi... what you said has not only made me more confident but also change my outlook towards lyf. Thnx a lot once again.

[Avinash]

I believe anything coming straight through heart can ever have mistakes. Only lucky ones get to know what they are meant to be. Beyond anything what really matters is who you are and what you feel strongly about. Opinion of people around you who have no freaking idea who you are ,is just a noise.

[Master K-tops]

I like the penultimate verse,it's just really good. But I think you made an error somewhere. Isn't 'terrific' actually a good thing? I believe you were going for 'terrible'.
This seems like a poem that could really be great if only you put more effort. The poem looks like you wrote it with insufficient care and just.....rushed. I think you could rework the poem,fix some verses,use a little figure of speech and it will turn out great. Once again,great topic but the writing could be better.

[Penny]

Thnx 4 pointing it out K. I actually wrote 'teriffic' without giving it a 2nd thought:-D. & yes i will lluk fore 2 improving but figures of speech is sumthing hard 4 me.

[Tassawwur]

For me the poem seems a little disconnected. Suggestions is stop using slangs even if authors note or comments,if not entirely stop then try limit it. I am sure it will help in your writing. Keep writing.