Sestet for depressed

Sestet for depressed

A Poem by Penny
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I wrote it when times were hard.

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Why the air feels so dry,
Why I always want to cry.
You will succeed when you will try,
But why in trying I am so shy.
My dreams say I'll fly up high,
But will that make me reach the sky??

© 2013 Penny


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You will reach the sky penny you will not be sad forever.A very moving poem keep writing:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

11 Years Ago

Tenkew vidya. It is hard sometimes to believe that I'll ever be happy but I am advancing towards the.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

11 Years Ago

You are welcome and you are doing fine:D
Thnx for showing concern sami, but things r already better. Still its nt bad 2 luk at hard times for inspiration..

Posted 11 Years Ago


I hope things get better . We all go through depresions so don't feel bad...A wonderful poem...:)........................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thnx marie, i know it looks forced becoz i ws just to sad at dat tym 2 arrange my thoughts, i hope u see more finishing in my later works

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have an interesting rhyming scheme, though it feels a bit forced.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2013
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Penny
Penny

lucknow, India



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An introvert by profession, I've developed a love for writing to express my feelings. Sadly its my only talent, wanna know from you good people if I can be a writer professionaly.I dont fit into any g.. more..

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