Bare

Bare

A Poem by Lomyth

Dreams... no that's not quite
Aspirations... more like 
Emptiness... nothing? 
Stream of consciousness in a physical
Sense, not the same
As "living in the moment"
But close to lacking
Plans...what are they?
What are mine?
Where do i
Stand... for yourself
For them... in you
I can just, just
Sit, sit and wait
Set in plans for future
Leaving nothing for today
But... what do i want?

© 2011 Lomyth


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Yeah, good question, what DO you want? ;3

Emptiness, nothing. Lol, sounds like me. I like this poem, it's thoughtful, it's deep, melancholy almost. I don't know what else to say so I'm just gonna say I like it. ;3

Posted 12 Years Ago


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