My Souls Sorrows

My Souls Sorrows

A Poem by Lomyth

why must it be
in all that i see
despite the reassurance
i feel a strong disturbance

this is not what i had wanted
to feel, myself, unsure 
despite your words i'm haunted
worried by thoughts unpure

for you my actions may seem steady
but here in my head they're not
i worry about relations and feelings
i dont want to feel this way
i dont want this fear
the fear that when you disappear
its intentional
i know its not
i know you have your life
with its complications
but i don't want to mess this up
i dont want to ruin this
like i've done before

this is a fools mind
here outside my head
and i think you'll find
i've more tears than shed

© 2011 Lomyth


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This was fantastic, it could use a little work but it reaches out to the reader. At least, it reached out to me. There were certain lines that really tugged on my heart and mind.
"i dont want this fear
the fear that when you disappear
its intentional"
that stanza was certainly my favorite along with the last one.
Keep working, I'll be sure to read more of your work ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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disturbance makes me think of sexual things. ;3 oh gawd, i love the second stanza! "despite your words i'm haunted worried by thoughts unpure" that just fits me to a T [lolcorny] right now... xD or a lot of the time it does, lawls. i really love that line. awhhh the third stanza, the long one, makes me really really sad. i WANNA HUG YOU. LIKE REALLY BAD. not fair. at all. and the last one makes me really sad too. *hugs...!* ♥♥♥ [aaha by the way this one is beautiful, too xDDD]

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was fantastic, it could use a little work but it reaches out to the reader. At least, it reached out to me. There were certain lines that really tugged on my heart and mind.
"i dont want this fear
the fear that when you disappear
its intentional"
that stanza was certainly my favorite along with the last one.
Keep working, I'll be sure to read more of your work ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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