Difference In Opinion

Difference In Opinion

A Poem by Lomyth

i think the strong are weak
holding themselves tall
for all we've once called meek
i've never seen them fall
we cannot see ourselves
for what we make so fake
we put un on our shelves
for showing makes us shake
but this i will not stand
to show you this facade
for all that is just sand
before what we have had
so i will slough this sham
so that it is seen
for all the man i am 
i can be your queen

© 2011 Lomyth


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"Meek" Love that word, too, reminds me of my charries. xD I love the word "facade" as well. and the word slough. I CAN BE YOUR QUEEN. AHAHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAHA. Sorry it made me laugh... i just... am imagining you... in like a dress and a tiara... oh gawd. xD anyway. i again like the message in this one as well. and i love the part. "we cannot see ourselves for what we make so fake". ;3 ♥ ♥ ♥ I don't know why I made the kitty face wink at you, but okay then. xD This one is sweet, too. GAH SO CUTE AND SWEET. I CANT EVEN CAN. *dies* xDDDDD

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