Fully Empty, Alone In A Crowd

here i am

all alone

like a king

without his throne

i know you

though we've not met

but i still feel

for you, so set

within my heart

a strong desire

to contact you

without the wire

till then ill be

here all alone

like a day

when no sun shone

Author's Note

This is new, and all for You.

Reviews

[r]

awhh this one is sweet too. and cute of course. the last line is really sad. well, not the last line, this: "here all alone like a day when no sun shone". it's really sad. im picturing you under a cloud with like rain all around you. it's depressing. ANOTHER HUG. ♥♥♥

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. beautiful title ... beautiful poetry ...
. the last four lines are particularly moving ...

[mrdionisio]

Really liked the line "contact you without the wire" There are many constraints with "the wire". Beautiful beginning, but the end (just the last two lines) seems generic. Overall, great job... did i mention that I really liked the beginning.