Missed Connections

Missed Connections

A Poem by Lomyth

These blue skies
That green grass
Are but lies
That wont last

I tell the truth
For what i know
This fleeting youth
Is melting snow

I cannot tell
For what is real
This is no hell
that i can feel

I thought i knew
But maybe not 
The feel of you
Now i'm distraught

I tell you this
Oh fleeting dove
All else heedless
'Tis you i love

© 2011 Lomyth


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Lomyth
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GAH I LOVE IT. I love the way the lines go together and the way they rhyme. It's flowy, and I like flowy things. and the melting snow makes me remember that it is WINTER. WHICH MEANS IT IS COLD. ME NO LIKE COLD. but me DO like this poem. ;3 lalala. i like how poetic the last stanza is. and i like the word "distraught" as well. xD i like a lot of the words you use. LALALALALALALAL. i love the "l" stanza [yes i am calling it that like a boss] the "i cannot tell for what is real, etc., etc.". ♥

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I love it, So well written.
Love the rhyme and flow.
Amazing write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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