So Distant

I would like to have some fun
And have that fun with you
But you stay far like earth from sun
Which makes my day seem blue
I try so hard to win your favor
But to a wall i talk
If i could just win you over
In moon light we’d walk 

Reviews

[r]

"To a wall I talk" That sounds like me 8D. I talk to walls ALL ZE TIME. LIKE A BOSS. Muwahahhaa. I really love this one. It's beautiful [which I seem to use a lot to describe poems 8D] and adorable [likeyouofcourse] and. Fun. Makes me think of sexual types. ;3 andnowgoodbye.

[niriall]

I really like this one. Its kind of about someone playing hard to get, no?

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a potent message locked within your words that provoke deep thought and consideration. You composed this with a whole heart filled with assorted emotions. Or at least that was my impression.

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So good, really enjoyed your words.
Sad but yet leaves room for hope.