So Distant

So Distant

A Poem by Lomyth

I would like to have some fun
And have that fun with you
But you stay far like earth from sun
Which makes my day seem blue
I try so hard to win your favor
But to a wall i talk
If i could just win you over
In moon light we’d walk 

© 2011 Lomyth


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"To a wall I talk" That sounds like me 8D. I talk to walls ALL ZE TIME. LIKE A BOSS. Muwahahhaa. I really love this one. It's beautiful [which I seem to use a lot to describe poems 8D] and adorable [likeyouofcourse] and. Fun. Makes me think of sexual types. ;3 andnowgoodbye.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one. Its kind of about someone playing hard to get, no?

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a potent message locked within your words that provoke deep thought and consideration. You composed this with a whole heart filled with assorted emotions. Or at least that was my impression.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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So good, really enjoyed your words.
Sad but yet leaves room for hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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