I'm From Me

I'm From Me

A Poem by Lomyth

i'm from here
white words
black text
bright skies
i'm from CA
and lakes
and mountains
deep valleys
i'm from lonlieness
and freindship
love
and anger
amazing places
whitewashed people
i'm from stories
in books 
in lost places
from chapters alone
and pages together
i'm from where i'm am
where am i?

© 2011 Lomyth


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I f*****g love this. I just love how when you write, for example, "white words, black text" and "lakes and mountains, deep valleys" I get the image of those places-slash-things in my head and it makes it so much better. I love the words you used for everything. And how you ended it like that and then said "where am i?". It paints and conveys like this beautiful [oh look, there it is!] message-slash-picture that's all mixed and confused. xD And a LOT of people are mixed up and confused. Me, as one example. xD So, yeah, I really love it. Obviously. ♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this so much. It's wonderful. I can relate to it so much. I love your focus. (: Your poems never cease to amaze me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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