Unseen

Sometimes i wish that i would be
Seen a little more
That someone might just notice me
Coming through a door 
I want a bit more recognition
A thought to what i say
That some may look in my direction
I hope will come one day 

Reviews

[[Rampant♍ Rapture..]

I love this poem. I love the idea of it. I love the thoughts. This is how I've thought for years. This is so true for many people. They wish to be seen but aren't. This is a wonderful poem, short maybe. But non the least it gets to the point, and that point is wonderful. (:

[r]

People ignore me all ze time. I have gotten used to it. xD I think it's hideous how people ignore others. IM NOT A GHOST, CHU DUMBASS. I AM BREATHING AS OF YET. ....xDDD I really like the rhyming in this one, as well. :3

[niriall]

This. Just this.