Unwanted Want

Unwanted Want

A Poem by Lomyth

I’m glad i have you here with me
And that i’m not alone
But i fear that you don’t see
The love that i have shown
It may not be right in your face
It might still be too much
If you want ill give you space
But i’ll miss your touch 

© 2011 Lomyth


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OhmGod, I love this so much. ♥ It's really sad and beautiful. Makes my heart hurt a little. [lol, i used beautiful to describe it again xD]. I love the rhyming, again, and I really love the feelings and emotions [same thing but it was necessary to repeat it] and the message. I really REALLY love this.

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I can feel your emotions in this,
Very nicely written and expressed.


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