Hidden Soul

Hidden Soul

A Poem by Lomyth

Left side leaves your life alone
Even in the dark
If you dont want to be out shone 
You must remove your mark
Within this world there are some things
That can crush a soul
But being dropped from high on wings
You feel stuck down a hole

© 2011 Lomyth


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I really, really love this one. It's beautiful [again, xD] and I really want to read more of this poem, like there should be more for me to eat up 'cause it be delicious, but I cannot 'cause there isn't. It is saddening. I really love the words you rhymed. And the message is sends. It's pretty and adorable, and I like things with those adjectives. ...xD ♥♥♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Well written and expressed.

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