Die?

Die?

A Poem by Lockedheart

I've been struggling
my whole life 
desperately 
trying to find 

things that keep me going 
keep me alive 

oh but Im
just slipping 
just stumbling by 
 
can't find peace 
in the day 
or the night 

never happy 
never satisfied 

so is it better 
to live 
or to 
die?

© 2023 Lockedheart


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Is it better to live, or to die? When all it seems that your life isn't all that special, and you are just stumbling by. I feel that in the moment, we think it is better to die because we don't see a end to the gloom we are experiencing, but there is always a little bit of hope and I think we should continue to live because we don't know what is in store for us in the future, and it can be something good. But how would we ever know if we chose to end our life? Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on March 29, 2023
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Lockedheart
Lockedheart

Palm Harbor, FL



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