Enigma to life

Not really a poem... but more of a statement... I have no idea where to put it.

The enigma to life
is a cosmic symphony
of roiling energy
oscillating a turbulent sea.

Its melody of higher frequency
falls upon deaf ears,
yet its presence is known
through vibrations of the soul.

Author's Note

Revised from original.

Reviews

[sette]

nicely written, the flow of words used is unique and a clear message has been delivered and indeed life can be an unsolved puzzle

[Chris Shaw]

The enigma to life
is a cosmic symphony
of roiling energy
oscillating a turbulent sea.

Its melody of higher frequency
falls upon deaf ears,
yet its presence is known
through vibrations of the soul.

I liked what you said very much, but my suggestion to you would be to give consideration to the way your words are presented. I have given an example for consideration, which is easier on the eye of the reader. Thank you for the read.