The Lovers Prayer
A Poem by
Lorriman
... you are each others sleeping rainbow ...
Remember when Long time before You tried to catch your heels Flying solo bound Remember who crept in the darkness of your room and played upon your heart such beautiful sounds Remember the childhood wonder and forgotten dreams of sleeping rainbows Whilst mother earth blows stolen virgin kisses leave dancing shadows to find their way Onto the crisp breath's upon the lips of such youthful lovers and time stands still for a moment And loves air is fresh to inhale Remember, you are the enormous tide that extends your mark upon this world The grace of spirited waves, tossed and turned by timid sprays Enlightened by the suns rays In spirit and fortitude: Solitude awaits you no more Welcome the deluge and purity This elixir of life, Behold! For if loves cool waters are united, rippled every wave would be paved in gold Exhale the release Inhale the vision among us Grow and evolve just as the rivers flow Embrace love together and reflect nature's gazes For you are each others sleeping rainbow Do not forget your united destiny You were meant to fly as in your dreams Only higher And together Forever Amen
© 2014 Lorriman
Author's Note
Poem I wrote and recited at a friends wedding. All thoughts and feedback welcome
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This is lovely. What a true gift to find someone that can be the one that brings out the best in you. My favorite line is For you are each others sleeping rainbows - what a nice way to say see all the potential. We can, we will. Nice tribute to love
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A great tribute here...the way this has that feel...and its always a bit different doing so in front of a crowd...yet this version is all --- we get...but I'm sure you did find at the wedding with this speech to the audience...
Posted 10 Years Ago
A great tribute here...the way this has that feel...and its always a bit different doing so in front of a crowd...yet this version is all --- we get...but I'm sure you did find at the wedding with this speech to the audience...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is lovely. What a true gift to find someone that can be the one that brings out the best in you. My favorite line is For you are each others sleeping rainbows - what a nice way to say see all the potential. We can, we will. Nice tribute to love
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is lovely. What a true gift to find someone that can be the one that brings out the best in you. My favorite line is For you are each others sleeping rainbows - what a nice way to say see all the potential. We can, we will. Nice tribute to love
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a lovely reading for a wedding...it truly reads like a prayer.
"Welcome the deluge and purity
This elixir of life, Behold!"
Your poetic nature is bountiful here, Steve.
Posted 10 Years Ago
What a lovely reading for a wedding...it truly reads like a prayer.
"Welcome the deluge and purity
This elixir of life, Behold!"
Your poetic nature is bountiful here, Steve.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lorriman Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom
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just some bearded fella with words to share
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