Lament to the Passing of the Moment
A Poem by
Lorriman
... she faded like a photograph left to curl in the sun ...
I saw it coming And then it was right there; in touching distance. The could've been would've been should've been But she faded like a photograph left to curl in the sun The moment passed... and then she was gone
© 2014 Lorriman
Author's Note
All thoughts and feedback welcome
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I saw it coming...
and she was gone...
---
the beginning and the end...yet there is more than meets the eye...in the middle...even with the expressive thoughts put in there...the missive...before the fall...the memories are never ancient history...but embedded there in the memory of your mind...
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I saw it coming...
and she was gone...
---
the beginning and the end...yet there is more than meets the eye...in the middle...even with the expressive thoughts put in there...the missive...before the fall...the memories are never ancient history...but embedded there in the memory of your mind...
Posted 10 Years Ago
I saw it coming...
and she was gone...
---
the beginning and the end...yet there is more than meets the eye...in the middle...even with the expressive thoughts put in there...the missive...before the fall...the memories are never ancient history...but embedded there in the memory of your mind...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"she faded
like a photograph
left to curl in the sun"
With each poem I read, you snare my vocation to read more...what a gift you have!
Thank you for your inspiration!
My best,
Kelly
Posted 10 Years Ago
"she faded
like a photograph
left to curl in the sun"
With each poem I read, you snare my vocation to read more...what a gift you have!
Thank you for your inspiration!
My best,
Kelly
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lorriman Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom
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