Inspired by a vintage erotic postcard from the 1920s - 30s I saw in a shop window...
The Muse sits resplendent caressed in sepia tones and pastel cream gilded with the glaze of a bygone era her silk Charleston negligee worn proud like a vintage ornament perched on an aesthetically pleasing shapely pert insolent bosom blossomed with tiny beads of sweat the heat of such anticipation entices the pearls of the voyeur to pamper and pleasure their perversions
Etched as if in a radiance of candlelight the flickering limbs pulse their bloom nimble fingers of dancing shadows cupping the feline curves of a chaise longue the purposefully out of place set piece the fantasy of a gentleman's reading room caked in casked sherry and Nat Sherman cigar infused aromas.
Her elegant pose sumptuous reclining elbow length satin gloves sensually wrapped in wanton desire two fingers clasp a Sorbranie Black Russian smoked like a sultry gypsy with a fervent demeanour from a silver opera cigarette holder beckoning with the cats eyes of mischief over Pinced nez eyeglasses with a fascination imbibed in the praxis of passion.
The peach skin of refulgent youth directs the viewer downwards, slowly survey each contour of olive skin and stroke every hidden cleft of fabric to glimpse the nubile thighs of grace leading the eye to the arch of an ankle slipped like a fitted glove nestled in the cleavage of her calf and the chastity of future wonderment
The forgotten photograph captures a period in time the memories of the muse now in motionless existence a demure allure forever frozen once lost, but now never forgotten.
Steve, your articulation is staggering...so is your attention to detail.
"The peach skin of refulgent youth
directs the viewer downwards, slowly
survey each contour of olive skin
and stroke every hidden cleft of fabric
to glimpse the nubile thighs of grace..."
Allow me to bow before you, for this is beyond words! It's brilliant!
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Thank you Kelly. You're pretty awesome yourself missus, an exceptional wordsmith, your poems inspire.. read moreThank you Kelly. You're pretty awesome yourself missus, an exceptional wordsmith, your poems inspire me to write. I can not give any greater compliment to a fellow poet than that :)
If a picture say a thousand words...
this read just did that with all its vocabulary in place and setting...
as you capture the moment in time...with this verse...
I as the reader --- needed to get a glass of wine...
and linger down the lines ---
and take each line of this spectacle...of a woman...
you describe in full bloom...
intriguing with a touch of beauty...
in the eye of the beholder...
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Thanks Glen, much appreciated... she was a beautiful woman, and I wanted to do her justice
The wording rich, elegant and a wonder to read and enjoy.
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Thanks for reading Alfred, and your kind words. Im glad you enjoyed reading as much as I did writing.. read moreThanks for reading Alfred, and your kind words. Im glad you enjoyed reading as much as I did writing it.
Steve, your articulation is staggering...so is your attention to detail.
"The peach skin of refulgent youth
directs the viewer downwards, slowly
survey each contour of olive skin
and stroke every hidden cleft of fabric
to glimpse the nubile thighs of grace..."
Allow me to bow before you, for this is beyond words! It's brilliant!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kelly. You're pretty awesome yourself missus, an exceptional wordsmith, your poems inspire.. read moreThank you Kelly. You're pretty awesome yourself missus, an exceptional wordsmith, your poems inspire me to write. I can not give any greater compliment to a fellow poet than that :)