One Night on Facebook

One Night on Facebook

A Poem by Lorriman
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Quotes taken as they are from Facebook feed 4th - 5th June, 2014

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"Actually smearing grape jelly on your body and 
running backwards in a cornfield doesn't sound half bad"

He said...

Looking forlorn outside a single glazed cracked window
comforted by burnt toast with jam
birch leaves laden with rain 
carrying the weight of the heavens
blistered in angst and the Memoirs of The Sad
awash in the broken remnants of forgotten pain.

"in this pocket I have an itsy tiny universe 
encased in an iridescent blue marble"

He said...

The Bearded Glaswegian Baptist evokes the reminiscent's
of a time before when we were all beard-less
lost in the dithering embryonic stutter mumble of life
diving gulls dunking for forgotten baubles and clear cut skulls

"I'd love to crush my ribs in this little beauty"

She said...

Stolen transmits of other worldly delights
like the chastity of a whale bone corset
strapped between the clunky and broad duty
of land licked silken shrouded soft moonlight

"so he totally set light to the kitchen table cloth 
blowing out those candles and for some unknown reason 
the family all gave a cheer. Thank God for Morphine"

They said...

Hiding in the sheltered shadows camouflaged in errors
mottled by the hues of indecision and impractical precision
lie the instabilities of truth in a blend of Codeine and Jasmine

"My brain cells keep fighting with each other! Poetry and Beer!"

She said...

Outcries of the exalted, bathed in salted peanuts 
and yesterdays microwave meal 
and the welcome stench of random sex
vibrates the very cherry of the soul and brings it to tears

"Enter the Dragon always makes me think of shagging Maggie Thatcher 
*Christ that was a horrible night"

He said...

The shivers of monumental disgust run like an odious puddle
thoughts go out for Dennis knitting his escape hatch 
and the unpronounceable muddle that befits the grave of beasts
and the microscopic sentiments of utter shameless sights

"Except for the offspring, soap and shampoo, This [all] makes sense"

Was the death knell...

Lost in ageless rhymes in legion soaked in the punishable treason 
Purified by the age of reason and magnified by the madness of time
to think that any of the world makes sense at all if this is a slice
think twice before engaging the brain, and hence
if this is normal for you then at least 
I know 
Im actually fine.

Quotes taken as they are from Facebook feed 4th - 5th June, 2014

© 2014 Lorriman


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Lorriman
All thoughts are welcome

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It felt like I was flipping channels on the TV...just goes from one subject to another and does not make much sense...I guess that's the point of the narrative...unless I missed something in this write...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Lorriman

10 Years Ago

flipping channels is a good way to describe it. I took actual conversations in my Facebook feed over.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

I say you covered an unorthodox interpretation here with this write...

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Added on July 16, 2014
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Lorriman
Lorriman

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



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