The Darkness of the Flesh

Let me lead you 
unto the darkness of the flesh
like a master potters gift
mould from base clay 
into something beautiful.

Stand among the giants of creation
touch the diamond studded starlight
just out of yonder reach.

Lay with the embrace of golden rainbows
caressing stolen mystics
as love draws her ripe breath
clinging to the curved and ample bosom
of moist and salacious longing.

Author's Note

All thoughts welcome

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Stand among the giants of creation
touch the diamond studded starlight
just out of yonder reach.
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Stand among the giants of creation
touch the diamond studded starlight
just out of yonder's reach.
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I liked this from the opening of the flood gates...yet as I came to the end --- I wanted to read more...but I believe its just enough to get the blood flowing and completion of this work...

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am baffled, how this could garnish only one comment out of 28 views!
...incredible work!

[Lorriman]

Thanks for reading and taking the time to post a reply Kelly. Much appreciated. In my book 2 reviews from people who like my words is worth 500 views any day of the week. Big love x

[Edward Lancheister]

a gently theme with a good imagery words, really well convey in every curve and the detail. brilliant

[Lorriman]

Thanks for reading Edward, and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated...