Demonic Exon

Demonic Exon

A Poem by Lorriman
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I am the only pawn on your chequered board, facing a feisty queen; of restricting submission...

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I am the barbed thorn
the serrated reward
facing savage cruel winter;
sedition in transmission.

I am the only pawn 
on your chequered board
facing a feisty queen;
of restricting submission.

I am the demonic exon
a heraldic discord
facing bleak futures;
an inherent disposition.

I am the stillborn reborn
the aberration restored
facing anomalies instability;
violation on a mission.

I am broken and worn
a fallen sword
facing a grim battle;
outnumbered by division.

I am the brass horn
the out of tune chord
facing orchestral expulsion;
a musician in remission.

I am history's forewarn
the contrite accord ignored
facing penitent absolution;
clemency in transition.

© 2014 Lorriman


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Lorriman
All thoughts welcome

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What if you make it...and make yourself whatever piece you want to be -- except the King...since that's your duty to protect...becoming King would render the rest of the stanzas obsolete...I'm off the curve on this review...taking a path less traveled...with my view of this work...it puts several themes in motion and makes the mind more compound with each one...

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What if you make it...and make yourself whatever piece you want to be -- except the King...since that's your duty to protect...becoming King would render the rest of the stanzas obsolete...I'm off the curve on this review...taking a path less traveled...with my view of this work...it puts several themes in motion and makes the mind more compound with each one...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good poem Rhymes well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorriman

10 Years Ago

Thanks John, much appreciated. Im new here, will post some more soon

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Added on July 10, 2014
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Lorriman
Lorriman

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



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