Burst

"I feel like busting loose!"

 

BURST!
By: Lorraine Pearson

May 27, 2007

I
no longer fit
Into
the tiny world
so defined
by your
miniscule mind.
Freedom awaits
none too soon
I'm
BUSTING LOOSE!

 

© Lorraine Pearson 2007
 

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

What a lot you said in so few words I have felt this way myself... Great Write!

~Frances~

This is good! I have felt like this at times. It is a great piece of powerful writing with so few words!

[DeAn]

nice. I like it in it's simplistic approach to letting go. you said as much as was needed to get it all out. I loved it.

:)
l8r g8r
-Tao

[Kelley Pascoe]

Short and sweet. I like them that way. Stright to the point(smile) I love the photo you put with this!!! It adds to the poem soo much. Great write!! Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Get out of that birdcage! lol A real burst of freedom.

[kurrupted]

short, thought provoking, and indeed powerful.
the concept of presentation adopted also stands out (the picture especially)... thumbs up

[A.J. Smith]

Fantastic expression of emotion...you're free! Nice write.

[Forest Green]

A punchy goodbye. Meaningful in its brevity.

Hope all went well.

Daniel

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This is good!! I liked the flow!! I think the structure helped to make the poem stand out. Great work!!

[jen -- JG]

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