Bubble

"life inside a bubble"

Bubble
Category: Writing and Poetry

 

The Bubble
By: Lorraine Pearson
July 6, 2007

Enter the abyss
All tangibility
Amiss
Surreal simply is
And certainty
A question.
Floating away
Wasted moments into days
Ceaseless longing never strays
Eternity lingers
Eyes cannot slumber
Limp-less, lifeless estrangement
All oxygen compresses
Trapped
Forever is now.
Eternity unreal.

Reviews

[Steffi]

Good idea. I dont know if it is just me but i had to re-read this piece after the inital read. The beginning is very jumbled that makes the reader either confused or makes it hard for the reader to get drawn into the piece.