Relentless Journey

A poem of love's longing...

Relentless Journey
By: Lorraine Pearson
March 9, 2008

To drown in passion's
Endless kiss
Knowing love, secured in bliss-
Entangled in a shroud of mist
Leaves me breathless...
Envisioning
Depths

As

This relentless soul
Journeys
While
My longing heart
Remains
Entwined on
A ribbon
Of
Hope.


© 2008 Lorraine Pearson

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Every one of your pieces speaks to me, sometimes on many levels. It's like you speak for me, when I can't speak. You make the words flow with meaning, imagery, topic, some with rhyme, all of them with a beautiful rhythm. Thank you for sharing your writing on WritersCafe.

[Chez Funk]

Tonya is right. We all have the hope.

[Nya]

I love the flow of the poem as well as the tone. Beautiful words. Great job.

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Delightful! A wonderful read from beginning to end!

"To drown in passion's
Endless kiss
Knowing love, secured in bliss-
Entangled in a shroud of mist
Leaves me breathless..."

You are wonderful with words!

Blessings,
mary

[Little Mouse]

Lovely style, short and sweet. The feeling conveys well and is very relatable! Nice job and welcome to writerscafe! -:3 )~~~