Do we fit?

Do we fit?

A Poem by Lola Positive
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confusing love

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Two girls 
One secret 
They say the heart wants what the heart wants
But I'm so afraid of whats to come
Two girls
One heart
When I lie awake thinking of you
My heart sings but my mind's in ruins
Two girls
One story
Do we share?
Do we dare to risk it all?
Two girls
One love
The same love as any other

© 2017 Lola Positive


Author's Note

Lola Positive
Hmmm, not sure if this turned out how I'd like it to but hey, let me know what you think

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"mind's" mind is?
Today's realities allow for relationships IF the local society IS tolerant and not religiously restrictive. Love isn't restrictive ...just given.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple words of love , good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

.......This definitely turned out ok. It definitely checks off many major boxes of what constitutes as a good poem. Nicely done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 10, 2017
Last Updated on December 24, 2017
Tags: love, poem, lgbtq

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Lola Positive
Lola Positive

New Zealand



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