Wheels

Wheels

A Poem by Lola Positive
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Abstract

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Time, churning cogs grind all to dust
Wheels rolling unencumbered down an empty road
Lost souls wandering, wait for the final destination 
Times changing all men to ash
Crushed by it's weight
Lost in it's depth 
Wheel standing still
Cogs seizing and halting
Times, flowing on
All sin
All grace
Dust 

© 2017 Lola Positive


Author's Note

Lola Positive
never really done anything like this before so interested if I should write more

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I'm spellbound. I'm transfixed. ...it reads with an enchanting flow with vivid imagery on top of it.1 can say no more than that. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola Positive

6 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much, it really means a lot to me
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure. Thanks for sharing.

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Added on December 10, 2017
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Lola Positive
Lola Positive

New Zealand



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