The Sands Of Time

The sands of time are like a clock, 

From birth till death, they never stop,

Like the blooming of a flower, 

As the time runs into hours.

The sands of time are like a breeze,

Like the swaying through the trees,

Like the rising of the sun,

When the day has just begun.

The sands of time are like the sea,

Like little waves rippling free,

Like the moon so bright and bold,

As the young turn into old.

The sands of time are like a dove,

They pass us by when your'e in love,

Like the days that come and go,

The sands of time will always flow.                                                     

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Nancy S.]

beautiful melody, your words. falls off the tongue in perfect rhythm. well done.

[Jane Darby]

I wrote this years ago so there is no reference to Prince of Persia (although we have got the game lol)

[RTB]

sands of time, prince of persia lol great write tho :P

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

Prince of persia much? hehe. Great write. =)

[-K]

Beautiful piece. Nice smooth rhyme pattern. Nice work.

[Art Sun]

nice work on this view of life and time...

[KatiePie]

"As the time runs into hours."
Was my favorite line. This whole thing has a beautiful and rhythmic flow to it, I really enjoyed reading this piece, it's interesting and really catching the eye. Beautiful write.
-Cathrine

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting thoughts about life and how we can live it or let it pass us by..Good job.Sunflower

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

smooth rhyme flow~ liquid time presented as an ebb and flow like waters across sandy shores~lovely~