I'll be waiting

I'll be waiting

A Poem by Lorien Black
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I wrote this song for my husband when I was sad of being away from him a long time. At the time we were faced with many difficulties that we managed to overpass. The hardest was the long distance.

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I'll be waiting
Just one look and I could see
How much different you're from me

But there's so much more you hide
Underneath your shallow kind

There's no future to foresee
Seems there's no hope left to be

But I'll be waiting 
I'll be waiting x2

But you must know one day I'll stop 
I can't wait for a life time

What we feel, we can't deny
We can do this if we try
Have no fear the time will tell
Think too much you go through hell
 
There's no future to foresee
Seems there's no hope left to be

But I'll be waiting 
I'll be waiting x2

But you must know one day I'll stop 
I can't wait for a life time
I wish you fell, with or without
I know it's hard
But I know I can go on...

If we decide we can't go back
Leave your life, I leave mine,
Let's go somewhere we can hide

 

© 2011 Lorien Black


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written so well, beautiful write

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh how nice. i really like this. it is well written and flows smoothly. it has so much emotion too. this is a great example of what poetry really is and it is much better than anything i have ever written. nice job! i loved it!

love-alexa

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2010
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