cherished enemy

cherished enemy

A Poem by Loribeth215

forget loving..

 

I need to make war,

I need to take you apart, my cherished enemy

let me rip you from the seams

 

tonight,

the fires burn against the sky

 

forget passion

isn't love the most fragile of things?

 

passion is often pain

and I will tear you apart,

let me tear you apart...

 

I need to wage war

your words are knives,

your eyes cut me deep.

 

I can show you

the power within

I surrender my last surrender

 

forget loving,

I come to make war.

© 2008 Loribeth215


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oh this wonderful ,you chose some tricky matter ,oh this love hate relation is so common ,and bewildering,yes i hate but with my self dear ,never ever too much ,i want to kill you ,but if you die ,i swear i kill myself,i will send you away ,far but not far enough ,i will make sure ,you are always near,,i want to hurt,but i just could ,cause i love you ,i know could never do it no matter how i tried , i want to be cruel but i am ever so soft,cuase i am in love,and nothing will change that ,you go and hurt ,but i will never stop loving you,great writing really

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I write poetry and stories, but you'll see more of the former than the later, as I am trying to sell several stories to online publishers. You can see many of my stories on the following websites: .. more..

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