Your Voice

Your Voice

A Poem by Loribeth215
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Sometimes, it's not the words, but how you say them.....

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your voice

has the same timbre I remember

that little pause, a breath,

when I speak your name.

 

holding the phone tighter,

I remember how you used to look

when that word crossed your lips

 

I said something polite, a rush of words...

 

who knows what they were?

 

My heart was wandering

somewhere in the past

remmebering

the tenderness of your voice.

© 2008 Loribeth215


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very sweet words ,very romantic ,very dreamy ,when we talked ,i will never remember any but your sweet voice,with all the tenderness in the world all felt in it and i keep remembering,how nice ,your words so pretty to read ,wonderful

Posted 16 Years Ago


There is something to be said about how all the time can appear to disappear, when we speak again with somebody we have not spoken to in what seems like forever. It can be as if no time had passed, as if it were just earlier in the day rather than over ten years ago. What is said may not be remembered, just lost in the memories of the voice itself.... of previous conversations. It is amazing, how true this can be.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nostalgia can be painful. And yes, the way and tone in which words are said are more powerful than the content itself.

Nice write. You have a unique style I enjoy.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Loribeth215
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I write poetry and stories, but you'll see more of the former than the later, as I am trying to sell several stories to online publishers. You can see many of my stories on the following websites: .. more..

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