I am with You

chimes on the wind

a melody in the air

the warmth of sunlight slanting through a window

and I am with you

just the faintest shadow of a touch

a memory

I whisper

and only silence answers back

I am loved

your heartbeat

moves with mine

your blood races like mine

just a memory of your

warmth

and the scent of your skin

makes me whole again

and I am with you.

Reviews

[FrikinFrancesca]

That is really good, Good job! 8D
There is so much emotion from this.

[Dani California]

just the faintest shadow of a touch
a memory
I whisper
and only silence answers back

Those lines did it for me.
I read loss in this poem, though
it could just be my interpretation.
The death of a loved one, now with
you in spirit...

Beautifully written. The passion and
emotion was felt in your words... and
that's what makes a great write ... :)

Well done!

[MagiCrystal]

I'm with you !! very nice thoughts and i like the flow..Magic

[CLUTZ]

very nice.

[BLFK]

The thing that sticks out in my mind of reading ''I Am With You", is the images that popped into my head.
Keep pushing the boundaries in your writing, because this has a lot of emotion behind it.
Very nice job,

BLFK

[bluessadmood]

great ,love romance nice images,memories of him bring you back whole again ,wonderful ,loved it