The Smallest of Vows

 

 

 

 

if you love me

love me without boundaries

with passion, with decision

love me

with your flaws, your fears, your pain

love me in the dark,

the rain, the sun, all the same.

fearless, without restraint

love me

(for the smallest of vows)

bears the largest of promises.

Reviews

[Gracie]

Really..really...good...so much in so few words..makes me want to know what happened in their lives!!

[Evil_Angel]

Aw beautiful and so true. The small vows we make mean so much more. Its really not what we say its what we do. So beautiful I can imagine this being read at a wedding or something.

[Anima Inspired]

This speaks the truth..."the smallest of vows/bears the largest of promises"...

Love without boundaries and restrictions, isn't that how it's supposed to be? Yet, sadly, it isn't most of the time. Beautifully written...very short and concise, to the point and right to the heart!

[bluessadmood]

wow you sure know how to speak beautiful words of love,you say if you love me,i want it all i want the whole of you i want all your mind your spirit ,your whole attention paid only for me, i want love that knows no limits,i want you to say wide mouthed ,i love you with all my i live only for you ,yes thats the promise i want, i do not want the perfect man ,i want you with all your faults your fears your pains ,i want the love of human not the love of a superman ,for i am a dreamer ,i love you when you are down and blue i love you when you are at your weakest ,i love you when you are most in need,i want you so vulnerable as scared as you could be as weak as i can see for then you will be all ready to love to love me all,for i am a dreamer,show your love when all see ,show it under the rain and when the sun is high up ,with no restraints,full pure love i want for i am a dreamer,i want you to promise me all that and i will be all yours ,for i am a dreamer,lovely just great ,i am filled with emotions

[Pointblank]

Anyone who can promise this type of love should certainly get married those who can't don't because the smallest of vows can can't bear the largest of mistakes. Excellent write!!!

[CLUTZ]

beautiful. i like it.

[Rebecca]

Wow... so few words and yet so deep a meaning. True love caught an expressed so throughley, yet simply enough to understand. I`m totally loving this piece of work. =)

[lioness]

I love this.
It is so passionate- you know what it reminds me of? A lover who suddenly speaks their mind, says how they feel, and decides to do something with their love.

This turned my whole day around.
Great job!
:D

[Adrian K. Smith]

A plea that the one you love in return allow themselves to love you, that they get out of their own way - that they love you with both heart and mind. There have been so many people thinking this same thing on here of late, each saying it in their own way - some very complicated, some too simple - this one does it just right.