the Ache

beneath your tongue

under your eyes

beating against your ribs

a little burning

inside your soul

it comes

it goes

but it doesn't really ever leave

you alone

if you say so, I can stay

let me drive away

the ache....

Reviews

[celyn]

I like the rhythm of this,
and the way that it's short - but not too short, it still explains everything about aching..
Nice work (:

[bluessadmood]

oh tell me love for i feel it inside of you ,that pain and ache shows well ,it comes and goes ,love if you want i am ready to stay by your side and drive your ache away,for i love you too much to stand seeing you hurt ,so romantic and lovely...

[CLUTZ]

the aching of one's heart, it is a terrible thing. GOD! I'M STARTING TO SOUND LIKE AN OLD PERSON! ha ha ha!! great poem, i like it.