Sacred

 

tonight

the rain falls against the windows

a somber winter refrain

the candles burn low

and silence around us

is greater than the silence between us

tonight, stay a while

let me feel your warmth again

whisper to each other in the dark again

if we keep this night sacred

the morning will not have to know...

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh such a nice talk and whispers between lovers and even the candle and winter is in the conspiracy ,yes they all gathered to make the the night not like any other night,the silence around shared too it grew more come,come i tell you ,stay a while ,let me feel and be filled with your warmth,lets whisper to each other in the dark ,no body will hear us if you make this night like no other night if you make it very special ,if you turn it so sacred even the morning will not know of our secret ,come lets conspire together,let love like no other loved ,lets live the night full and no one will ever share us our moments in paradise,oh sweet ,sweet words of love ,never ending ,just loved it all,wonderful

[Andrainea Silverlite]

I really love this. I love the imagery it provokes. Great job!

[Spoken]

wow... some great lines here that are outstanding and stood out for me for whatever reason...

the candles burn low
and silence around us
is greater than the silence between us

whisper to each other in the dark again
if we keep this night sacred
the morning will not have to know...

um considering that is like half if not more of the poem I'd say yeah blew me away! :)