Embrace

Embrace

 

 

that embrace

made me still

and made me strong

took my breath

and made me wait

just a touch

and a silence

and your heart

moving against mine

I was scared, I was sure

I've loved before

but it was not the same

this is what it has been

this thing I could give no name

now what I want

is that touch again

the gentle roughness

of that embrace.

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh true love comes only once they say ,the woman knows she feels it ,she is all emotions ,who can trick her ,her heart is her guide,and she feels that embrace differ from any before,she knew some before but this is new,i was still ,no breath ,i was scared so i knew i just knew,and now i want gentle roughness of that embrace i really long for it for it will set me high ,i know its its love real true love and i knew it just now ,i am lucky and so happy for i am in love first ever and i am happy,wonderful really

[Regis Auffray]

Sometimes it is very hard to find that "special" love once it has gone astray. Nicely expressed. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

[Pointblank]

The imagery I get here is just beautiful. Your writing flows has function and feeling and pulls you into the piece. I am slowly becoming a fan the more I read. It connects with me. I hear ya. Superb.

[Dani California]

I have to concur with Anima Inspired -- *sigh*.
Yes, this is nice...
it makes me long for that embrace..
so you've projected the emotions very well...

"took my breath
and made me wait
just a touch
and a silence.."


very well indeed..

Great job!

[Anima Inspired]

*sigh* I have felt these emotions. This was nicely done...a good depth to the emotion portrayed. There are some places where the lines feel a little choppy, but I actually do like the short lines, they bring a certain strength to the passion in the piece.