You won't remember me...

bullied by life?

Tick tock Tick tock

My life’s a short clock

I’m running I’m falling

I’m hitting a block

 

I’m a tiny hamster

Running in its wheel

I keep going faster

Ignoring what I feel

 

Bark bark Bark bark

I’m an ugly dog

I get kicked in the back

I get lost in the fog

 

Chop chop Chop chop

I’m an old tree

They use my wooden heart

But they scar my beauty

 

Slap slap punch punch

I’m a little kid

I get beat up at lunch

They don’t regret what they did

 

Bye bye Farewell

To all you species

I wasn’t treated well

You won’t remember me

 

 

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think! oh and i suggest reading it out loud; it shows the rhyme

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

owa really good one ! u matched every rhythm very well nd expressed the sour filling amazingly ,well done ! very nice writing ..

[TheLostMind]

I like the concept of this poem. Reminded me of the quote - "nobody dies a virgin, life f***s us all". ( ps : I apologise for my language).. I love the way you start this poem -Tick tock Tick tock
My life’s a short clock
I’m running I’m falling
I’m hitting a block.

The rhymes fit in well.. The flow is good.. A really good write. :)

[Lorena]

hahah i like that quote! thank you so much for your comment :D

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome.

[Justin]

that was really great :) :) the rhyme was really great, it all makes sense!!!!!! :)

[Lorena]

Thanks a lot Justin! i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Justin]

your welcome lorena!!!! it was really great :)