It's Been Awhile

It's Been Awhile

A Poem by Lorame
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It’s been awhile since you told me

It’ll be alright

It’s been awhile since you’ve been here

To help me with this fight

It’s been awhile since you called

I miss your voice

It’s been awhile that I have waited

Or have had a choice

 

Yes, it’s been awhile since I have found

These walls crumbling down

And it’s been awhile since I have known

The love you had shown

Oh it’s been awhile since I’ve seen your face

There's nothing left in this place

It’s been awhile

It’s been awhile

 

It’s been awhile since you held me

Or have made me smile

It’s been awhile since I’ve noticed

Anything worthwhile

It’s been awhile since I’ve laughed

I can’t without you

It’s been awhile that I have waited

What else can I do

 

Yes, it’s been awhile since I have found

These walls crumbling down

And it’s been awhile since I have known

The love you had shown

Oh it’s been awhile since I’ve seen your face

There's nothing left in this place

It’s been awhile

It’s been awhile

© 2011 Lorame


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Just gosh... So beautiful and I completely relate to this piece at this very moment. The thing is, I have heard your voice and can hear you once again as I read this song. I am always so excited after reading your work because I anticipate truly hearing it not long after. You have a lovely voice and your instrumental in always phenomenal. From one music lover to another, all your readers should take a moment to listen to what you are capable of, Lorame. Reading the lyrics does not do complete justice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome lyrics.
It flowed perfectly and I could feel the rhythm throughout the piece.
Keep it up.
P.S, sorry for taking such a long time to write back.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet...

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is just a nice flow to it, and I was pretty much singing this in my head. Good pacing, the rhymes work very well, and the repetition doesn't feel excessive.
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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