Need

Need

A Poem by Lorame
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I’ll do it right this time

Please don’t tell me I am wrong

This broken heart is yours

As it should have been all along

Carry me

As you rewrite this sad song

And teach me to sing again

 

I can’t save myself this time

No, no

And there’s no longer any rhyme

It’s all so

Cold and broken

Without your touch

I’ve never needed you this much

 

I’ll fight it out this time

Please don’t let me be afraid

My heart is healing now

It has finally been remade

Carry me

As you still write my life’s song

And teach me to love again

 

I can’t save myself this time

No, no

And there’s no longer any rhyme

It’s all so

Cold and broken

Without your touch

I’ve never needed you this much

© 2011 Lorame


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Very enjoyable lyrics, Lorame. I mean this is sad, needing the one you love, "Cold and broken Without your touch", and yet this is beautiful at the same time. My favorite was the third stanza, it was lovely to sing and perfectly written. Thank you for sharing your incredible rhyme. You have a talent for song writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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